my new friend
co gi sai mot nguoi sua cho minh nha!!!!
Vo Minh Khanh is my new friend in general english class. he is 20 year old, he comes from Thot not
he is a first-year student of economics at Can Tho university and his job is a finance-bank.
he say that he likes to learn english because he need it for future job and he want to work for region company.
he feels comfortable with a reading, writting, speaking and listening english.
he also likes playing sport such as football, badminton, volleyball..... it helps his relaxation and toughness one's day.
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Vo Minh Khanh is my new friend in general English class. He is 20 years old, he comes from Thot not, he is a first-year student of economics at Can Tho university and his major/speciality is financing and banking. He says that he likes learning english because he needs it for future job and he wants to work for a foreign company. He's interested in reading, writting, speaking and listening to English. He also likes playing sports such as football, badminton, volleyball.....because it helps him relax and keeps him tough every day.